Rap beat – memories

i know that this is not Graded but i would like to hear your feedback on this beat i made, i need to level the bass with the melody, and its still lacking transitions.

as for the theme and melody, i wanted to have an arabic style melody and match the lyrics, the lyrics are still not finished for it yet, i only have the 1st verse now.

!!Edited!! LINK : https://picosong.com/whfms/

1st verse :

man i am livin’ on a minefield

people are stepping on it daily with their right heel

man its driving me insane but im living inside my brain im alive inside so im alive here

in a second your soul will elevate,

call me terminator cuz i terminate

am i crazy mates ? for escaping baits ? people trynna hug me & detonate

baghdad is a place for deathly ways, its a ghost-town when it passes 8

so the 4 pound never leaves my waist, so it incase it goes down you’ll meet your fate

its a crysis man i wonder why we livin’ so close to ISIS

im torn to slices im torn to slices

my blood on the news as merchanise and

its not surprising its not surprising

im lost in the dark with no horizon

now children dying, and leaders lying

in yemen libya syria and iraq after palestine

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i would like to know your feedback

thanks