Currently This Version is what i am happy with.
i changed the EQ on the main vocals and tweaked some of my coloring effects * i hate adding coloring effects but for this vocal i had to put 3 different coloring effects(phatter knob,louder knob, puig to add presence and air, they are all from waves). which is why i was hesitant about weather it is accepted or not.
this is what it sounds like : https://picosong.com/wAACC/
what it needs to sound better : ( in my opinion )
1) tweaking on the chorus to level it better with the instrumental
2) secondary vocals for the verse to make it sound richer ( for the lack of a better word in my vocabulary )
3) with the pre-chorus i added a delay that sounds nice, but i dont know if its too much or not, the feedback is mixed from the people who listened to it, i guess i will lower it a bit just to be safe though i think it sounds great like this.
il do what i can on these things tonight to see if i can make it sound better so that i can submit a better version tomorrow. i dont know if i leave these things to the mixing phase is a good idea or not , because the phrase ” it will come out in the mix” is what i want to avoid. so il do what i can on these. Thanks for reading 🙂
Darky 964 